Thursday, September 17, 2015

rough story and outline

Rough story and Outline

Outline

Summary
Every month the town deals with some new crisis. This time, a giant fish has been over-hunting in the lake. The problem is that with the fish eating everything in the lake, it's hard for the local fishermen to catch anything. Since the townsfolk have so much faith in Rusty, they task her with getting rid of this giant fish in the lake. Rusty tries multiple things to fix their fish problem. With every failture, the townsfolk begin to lose hope in her abilities. Worried, Rusty begins to panic for a solution, she's afraid of losing her admiration. Finally, she strikes success on the last attempt, and the towns people have restored their faith in her.


Beginning
Rusty exits her home feeling starving. While walking by the wharf, she notices that the fishermen are pulling up empty lines. One of the fishermen approaches her about their issue. She finds out the fishermen haven't been able to turn up a single fish for an unknown cause.

1.
After a short investigation, Rusty discovers that the problem is a giant fish has been over hunting in the lake. The fish has been clever enough to disguise it's shenanigans thus far, and Rusty plans to stop it.

2.
Rusty comes up with several genius ideas to rid the fish from the lake. Due to her hunger and exhaustion, she has been failing.
With every failure, the townsfolk lose faith in her ability.

3.
Finally rusty comes up with the perfect solution, and enacts her plan.
The fish is subdued

Rusty is rewarded with a lovely meal from the townsfolk, in part provided by the giant fish.
END.


2 comments:

  1. Expressions need to be full bodied and if you are doing a 3-D film you need to shade the expressions to show volume.

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  2. Please change your blog so that it is readable. The dark on dark is too difficult to read.

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